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you will feel (Free verse) by nentwined

you will feel my pain every ounce, every FLUID ounce of every drop of my blood as every razor scar erupts: one giant burst of ecstasy-- I AM HERE! and now I'm gone.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Mar-03/5:02 PM
I must say I thought that was going to be good just from your first line but nope. Not really sure what went wrong but it ended up a trainwreck. -3-




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