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Lonely Soul (Free verse) by faded_twilight

Crying my eyes out My heart's bleeding For a man who might not even know How much I love him I can't tell him I can't bear to The rejection would kill me The revelation would shatter my heart And what would come of it? Nothing but anguish I can't bear the thought of rejection I would die from the pain My heart is dying from the pain It hurts so much My tears are my only comfort This is the life that I lead This is the pain of an lonely soul.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Jul-02/4:12 PM
E'en as I read this masterpiece, I broke wind in jubilation! A priceless classic! Don't listen to those other folks. They just like to criticise willy-nilly. Why do you think I have 5 poemes in the 'Worst' section? A travesty indeede.




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