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Fleeting Fantasy (Free verse) by Sawa

Unraveled resistance And disappearing clothes Skin kneaded with warm hands Thighs beneath fingers shaped Into melting handfuls of flesh Arms bound in tight embrace Worldly taste of your ruby lips Promises mended with begging gasps Knife from my back extracted and Trembling with the power of action I use your slick stomach as a sheath Burying finality where it belongs You've come back to me

thepinkbunnyofdoom 24-Mar-03/12:17 AM
Hmmm... Amazing. I have given every below a 5 and above it but I have never read a peom that left me felling neutral towards it. So congrats you get my first -5-.




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