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Who am I? (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Identity versus confusion Real life versus illusion Is this what I've been longing for? Its been so long I can't remember Who am I? Who am I? Where do I stand? Am I a mouse or am I a man? What is my Ambition? While I was searching for direction I came upon my own reflection There is no future when you have no past No hope thats ever gonna last If I have any depth its because I'm hallow Lost with no clue what path to follow Asking who am I over and over again Searching for my motivation

lunar 23-Mar-03/3:30 AM
Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!




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