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Spring Haiku
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Haiku
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Staika
You tear at my eyes like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk
Jill Stockinger
14-Jul-02/2:43 PM
Tear and spear don't work as
being analagous enough, for me.
Jill S. I LOVE "like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk."
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