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Spring Haiku (Haiku) by Staika

You tear at my eyes like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk

Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:43 PM
Tear and spear don't work as
being analagous enough, for me.
Jill S. I LOVE "like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk."




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