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Relentless (Free verse) by GekoHawaii

Two constants in my life On Opposite ends of a spinning magnet Two distant extremes Weaving in and out of my view Quickly Changing Always moving Never letting me adjust I reach out to chance the present But my hand is struck down By an invisible foe I cannot stop this cycle For these constants shall forever Torment my soul I do not stand alone in this Others experience these demons Many cherish one Many embrace the other Yet both exist as opposites And shall always Be a curse to me

thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Mar-03/9:00 PM
The way that your words talk about being pulled to different sides and then your eyes feel like they are being pulled to the other side of the page,*gasp for breathe* is absoluty genius. I'm creating a new award just for you. You get the BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD and the SWEET NEVER BEFORE AWARD. -10- and -10- But seeing as to how I only have one vote... You only get -10-




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