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Lover's Portrait (Free verse) by Dancer

I will paint your portrait Your face will be sad no sparkle in your eyes no smile in your frown And your body will be all twisted Your hands will be green the color of your skin will be grey like its been beaten I will show your dark heart like the portrait of Jesus but your picture will look hurt you are of course cause you finally realize how I feel how you made me feel when our love is gone

Jay J.C. 17-Mar-03/9:45 AM
u can make this better




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