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Another Dull Moment (Free verse) by Blindproject217

Another dull day Another boring moment I search these desolate streets for signs of life I am overcome with calamity and strife Plagued by this earthly mindset The world is plotting against me Day and night it plans my demise My eyes are dimming The light in this place has long since faded I choke on the dark As slowly I am suffocated I turn my eyes As I take my last breath I see your face And I am in wonder at your beauty So perfect so picturesque You take your hand in mine No longer do I look for a sign No longer do I search for a reason The vail is lifted I stand up and slowly look around The light comes And I slowly understand Why I?ve wasted all this time Why I?ve wasted all these years Why I?ve thrown away these moments Why I?ve used up all tears Time has come And time has gone But you stand here My longing heart has found no answers to speak of No longer must I search for reason I have found it in you

lastobelus 17-Mar-03/7:21 AM
after which, you can simply change the title to "man choking on own figurative vomit saved by beautiful woman"




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