-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.17 Mar 2003
I would suggest the following changes:
"Another Dull Moment" --> " "
"Another boring moment" --> " "
"I search these desolate streets for signs of life" --> " "
"I am overcome with calamity and strife" --> " "
"Plagued by this earthly mindset" --> " "
"The world is plotting against me" --> " "
"Day and night it plans my demise" --> " "
"My eyes are dimming" --> " "
"The light in this place has long since faded" --> " "
"I choke on the dark" --> " "
"As slowly I am suffocated" --> " "
"I turn my eyes" --> " "
"As I take my last breath" --> " "
"I see your face" --> " "
"And I am in wonder at your beauty" --> " "
"So perfect so picturesque" --> " "
"You take your hand in mine" --> " "
"No longer do I look for a sign" --> " "
"No longer do I search for a reason" --> " "
"The vail is lifted" --> " "
"I stand up and slowly look around" --> " "
"The light comes" --> " "
"And I slowly understand" --> " "
"Why I?ve wasted all this time" --> " "
"Why I?ve wasted all these years" --> " "
"Why I?ve thrown away these moments" --> " "
"Why I?ve used up all tears" --> " "
" Time has come" --> " "
"And time has gone" --> " "
"But you stand here" --> " "
"My longing heart has found no answers to speak of" --> " "
"No longer must I search for reason" --> " "
"I have found it in you" --> " "