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Looks like war, but tastes like chicken (Villanelle) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Looks like war, but tastes like chicken. Do you have any Grey Poupon? Damn, that Eagle was sure finger lickin'. The taste of it shall kill & sicken. Would you like me to put the soup on? Looks like war, but tastes like chicken. "Cream, with that broth, should proudly thicken." If you will allow me to quote Satan. Damn, that Eagle sure was finger lickin'. The smell of it would leave you smitten. That bird can drop eggs by the kilo-ton. Looks like war, but tastes like chicken. But can a fowl-balding-bird sing Rasputin, while feasting upon ol' Enoch's son? Damn, that Eagle sure was finger lickin'. We'll knead at that tit just like a kitten. Can I get mine sunny side up with some bacon? Looks like war, but tastes like chicken. Damn, that Eagle sure was finger lickin'.

Caducus 17-Mar-03/6:13 AM
line 3 very clever, america is eaten by greed, finger licking good connection of freedom, really kicks the ass of irony so hard it pukes from the mouth.

Last stanza is it needed? 8




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