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My friend (Lyric) by Luv2write

I'm too afraid to tell you How much you mean to me Too afraid to let you know You're the only one I see I'm too afraid to tell you The love I have inside Too afraid to throw away My foolish, selfish pride I'm too afraid to tell you All the things I think and feel About the love I've always hoped Would one day be so real I'm too afraid to let you know The things held in my heart Too afraid to look to the day When our romance will start I was too afraid to tell you So hard for feelings hid Still too afraid to tell you But I think that I just did

Caducus 14-Mar-03/9:02 AM
Sweet and innocence shines through, originalty does not. However that will come with experience and practice. As a teen I forced myself to write which was in retrospect a mistake. However you may use parts of this poem as a theme for another poem later in life, keep writing: 6 :-)




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