poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Saturation Point by malakin.

itchiwitch13 Jul 2002

Really enjoyed your poem, Malakin. I love many of your lines like, 'You wouldn't walk before because
You were trapped in your tuxedo T-shirt and suspenders sitting in solitary confinement' and 'There's more to life than pondering posies
But not so much you should trample them'. A great reflection on pomp and vanity.