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Strung (Free verse) by bunniesnangels

Women are pearls you string, Slid next to one another with a satisfying "plink," Each singly-purchased treasure cherished momentarily And only with a new one in your pocket Do you dare release the gem you're fingering. 2/4/02

razorgrin 13-Mar-03/2:09 PM
reminds me of the four wives in the movie "raise the red lantern". Very good.




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