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sexy (Free verse) by elizabethann

he told me to dye my hair blonde and dress really sexy maybe i'll just shave my head and wear men's clothing sexy isn't my thing but i am beautiful with my scarred arms and not-so-perfect breasts and when i look in the mirror i can smile with my chubby cheeks and thick thighs. sexy just isn't my thing.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Mar-03/10:47 AM
I like your use of the words "really sexy" to make the poeme seem really sexy. Also, great job throwing "scarred arms" in there. Poetry is always so much more profound when scars are involved. It's just that they're so deep, and so beautiful. Yes. You heard me. I said "beautiful". Because my scars ARE beautiful. They say more about me than Eminem ever could.




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