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UNTITLED (Other) by bxjay170

BEHIND A DARK SHADED SHADOW, SCARED TO COME OUT TO THE REAL WORLD. LIVING AND DEPENDING ON DISTANT DREAMS, HE BELIEVES HIS GOING TO MAKE IT EVEN IF HE'S FALLING INTO A DEEPER HOLE. STRUGGLES JUST TO MAINTAIN HIS UNSEATTLED SOUL, HE PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN AT NIGHT AND DOESNT EVEN KNOW WHY HE'S IN THIS WORLD FOR. CRAZY THOUGHTS CIRLCLE AROUND HIS HEAD SHOULD HE BE ALIVE OR DEAD OR IS THERE SOMETHING MORE TO GAIN THROUGH HIS PAIN I WONDER WHY IS IT THAT SO MANY INDIVIDUALS ARE SCARED TO BE DIFFERENT, ISOLATING THOSE WHO C LIKE ME, YET AM EVERYTHING U WONNA BE

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Mar-03/10:26 AM
BEFORE YOU CONSIDER WRITING POETRY, TRY MASTERING THE ABILITY TO MASTER THE ABILITY TO WRITE COHERENT SENTENCES IN PLAIN ENGLISH. BECAUSE IF WE CAN'T EVEN DO THAT RIGHT, HOW CAN WE POSSIBLY HOPE TO TACKLE THE PROBLEM OF INFLATION? HOW CAN WE SOLVE EDUCATION? AND HOW CAN WE EVEN BEGIN TO DEAL WITH THE "COULDN'T CARE LESS" ATTITUDE THAT IS SO DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE FABRIC OF MODERN SOCIETY? I DON'T PRETEND TO HAVE ALL THE ANSWERS. I DON'T EVEN PRETEND TO WEAR UNDERPANTS.

DO YOU?




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