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On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) (Free verse) by <~>

Snap! Attune and pivot: A lithe and muscled escape, A whirling melee of grace, Spryly sprung over tumbled bramble. Crash! The tide ebbs, in haste, uphill: Ten tailed in tiny white flames Of ermined retreat. Run! To dun on dun: Gone.

god'swife 12-Mar-03/8:24 PM
Nice read. Good strong sounds. I know what dun means, but don't get dun on dun?




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