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Blustered (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

The tree panics and shakes and in doing so makes death inevitable

god'swife 12-Mar-03/3:23 PM
Other than the fact that death is always inevitable, regardless, I like this poem. It says a great deal, but you have to fix 'inevitable'. Great 5 syllable word, by the way.




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