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Crucifixion (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Romans laughing, wine saturates holy bread, Judas eats his supper.

<~> 12-Mar-03/1:44 PM
accepted, my fine and loyal swine. but i think your metaphors mix too much here. it's a stretch, but not so outrageous a stretch as to chink! into place.




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