Replying to a comment on:

first kiss (Free verse) by lost in america

Lips shaking- quiver, shiver against wallflowers not me not you but us. earthquake, maybe - tremor of new earth beneath; the last breath of friendship.

<~> 12-Mar-03/7:56 AM
'last breath of friendship' is a nice observation.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001