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Blustered (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

The tree panics and shakes and in doing so makes death inevitable

Caducus 12-Mar-03/5:35 AM
Get A title for this, that gives the reader a big idea what its about. A good title would be : The Shedding?

Idea: (trees dont panic) so ....

the tree shakes and rips,
As the wind whistles in glory,
Death is inevitable.

Play around with it, you know you'll get it.




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