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The lightest touch
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Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.
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11-Mar-03/7:26 AM
"Wispy swirling white."
very nice sounds, here. nice, the repeat for closure as well.
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