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The lightest touch (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.

<~> 11-Mar-03/7:26 AM
"Wispy swirling white."

very nice sounds, here. nice, the repeat for closure as well.




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