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Departing (Free verse) by scornofangels

Dance slowly my love this may be our last. Don't blink, don't look away. Just breathe. Let our memories comfort you on lonely nights. Let me be your lullaby. We'll meet again, doubt it not. I promise we'll be together forever. Hold me closer. Let your heart beat with mine. Our song is slowly ending, my story's almost told. Do you remember when we met? Will you remember when I'll leave? I'll never forget either, and all else in between. Let's move in sync one last time. Whisper me your dreams again. And with my last breath I love you.

OneFingerAnswer 11-Mar-03/1:59 AM
Ahh.. someone gave you the classic "I'm a dick so I'll vote 0 with no reasoning." vote. I liked it though. Sad but determined not to be. Fatalism without resignation. 6.




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