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The lightest touch
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Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.
INTRANSIT
9-Mar-03/6:47 AM
Your seven suggests a lacking somewhere. Could you point me in the right direction sir?
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