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The lightest touch (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.

INTRANSIT 9-Mar-03/6:47 AM
Your seven suggests a lacking somewhere. Could you point me in the right direction sir?




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