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Loud Taps (Haiku) by celiff

Rain is a Tap Dance Tap, Tap, Tap upon my brow Boom, claps the thunder

Robert K Foster 7-Mar-03/7:52 AM
how kindergarten like. I bet kids would love this--nice rhythm and simplicity... bad title, though.




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