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Aries, the God of war (Haiku) by Shardik

Ram horns crash, hoving. Whet stones sharply grind, census. Mars in retrograde.

<~> 6-Mar-03/1:57 PM
better. too many throw-away words for a haiku, though:

ram horns crash, ____ ____
whet stones sharply grind ____ ____
Mars in retrograde.

get on it son!!!




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