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Glass (Free verse) by Shar

There is no future And in knowing this I cannot express myself with words For fear of shattering the glass of the present But I know I ache with knowing I only ask That you hold the glass gently And bear the weight of my silent need To drink forever From our cup

anonymous 3-Jul-01/10:59 AM
pretty. :) I agree with Mark, though. [kaolin] I think I'd like to see it a little longer, perhaps to feel fragility more encompassing of the moment... then again maybe its shortness is its fragility...




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