-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.5 Mar 2003

What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.

HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.

1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.

2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.

3. "To freely" is wrong.

4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.

5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.

6. Shut the fuck up.

7. It's "its", not "it's".

Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.