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Scars (Free verse) by H0LL0WxL1F3

Scars of pain fill my soul, My tale of frustration has yet to be let out, The crimson blood gathering on my pale skin. Infinitive cruel names reply in my mind, Raging about, searching for the right way out, This is my way of setting my heart free of these emotions. Feeling such as regret also comes through my mind, Forcing my eyes to look at my sad arms, Forcing tears to enter my infected wounds. So here I am, crying on the floor, Observing what high school has done to me, Realizing that I will forever see the sight of scars.

horus8 4-Mar-03/12:24 PM
Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing? ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! has it ever crossed your mind that you are terribly uninteresting? get off of the floor nobody gives a fuck, do you know how many kids went to highschool before you? went through the same shit? You make me ashamed. Grow up, get up, shut up. This poem wins

THE BRASS TURDE AWARDE (created by me and da, and settle, in a basement of an attic on a submarine full of prawnes scantilly clad in your tear soaked g-strings, perhaps you should swallow a fucking bottle of Durt's Tylenol? Hey there's a thought... Oh but alas that wouldn't leave a scar would it? Try taking them while jumping off of a building then... Yeah now that's a scar. My motto is either do it (kill yourself) or shut the fuck up, okay? because in case you haven't noticed in the world around you? we have oil to steal and no extra funds to vitamin e your scars whelp. You are on your own. Get up, but don't keep writing. try voice lesson it works for most badly dressed whiny canadien and american and european pop starletts who have an important message such as yours? What was your message again? ah... yes, small tits. next.




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