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I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' (Other) by JakeBike

A 'pimple poem' is essentially an ode, written as an expression of teenage angst. It is often rhymed--forcedly so--and can be found scrawled in high school notebooks and on live journals across the net. Often, it lacks even a hint at rhythm, and its structure is rarely overly complicated. By definition, a pimple poem must contain simple, emotionally/romantically evocative words like 'love' and 'hurt' and 'ache' and 'night' and 'stars.' Often laced with odd manipulations of language (L3Et-5pe4k: 'ur' 'luv' 'l8r' 'ne') and fraught with common profanity, it offers a copious use of obvious rhymes (above/love, eyes/lies, heart/apart) and little in the way of metaphor. It is written by the budding poet, for the budding poet, and is a crucial step in one's development as a writer of rhymed poetry: it teaches one what to avoid when composing metrical verse. (see thepinkbunnyofdoom, katie, blade, Teen14, loneshadow29, Jay J.C., JoyfulySlotterdKitty, amalea, little_angel_maria, etc. for classic symptoms.)

H0LL0WxL1F3 4-Mar-03/8:10 AM
You create good points, but you use stereotypes which are not needed. And what's really uneccessary is puting usernames at the bottom. Let them deal with their own poetry and you your's. I see you want whats best for the world of poetry, and what's best is letting the creativity of the world flow into one. That way. Poetry can't die. You have talent. Use it for a theme more useful.




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