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What the runes said (Other) by INTRANSIT

A handfull of sand to the wind, grains showed me the story of friends and to the earth they did recind. I walked along a gravel bed, the many sounds of families took residence within my head. I chose a stone at the waters edge, and felt its story of battering and drowning in the waters cage. A boulder strong cut my finger, So I put my hand to my mouth the salt of the rock did linger. As I approached the cliffs that slept, I smelled the story of their ages and from within their cracks they wept.

TanHand 3-Mar-03/9:06 PM
Interesting work. Nice narrative. Doesn't say a whole hell of a lot very clearly.




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