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first kiss (Free verse) by lost in america

Lips shaking- quiver, shiver against wallflowers not me not you but us. earthquake, maybe - tremor of new earth beneath; the last breath of friendship.

OneFingerAnswer 1-Mar-03/12:23 AM
I like it. Reminds me of myself not too long ago. Sweet. Innocent. Naive? Good luck. (6)




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