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The Sadistic Mirth (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

The breath of air I breathe Is drawn in a sharp gasp And then to exhale is a long Piercing shriek That I alone can hear My life exists in agony My existance in suffering And I suffer in desolation I refuse to move Refuse to allow myself to heal It is my hand that causes the pain I am the murderer I bring Pain to the innocent My death would be welcome To those that have reason to hate It is my time to seek a Vengeance so unjust that I Am marked as an evil force I am the beast unleashed Know my pain

Freethinker1602 26-Feb-03/4:18 PM
Perhaps you misunderstood the comment. I try to catch all of my errors before posting, so I run them through word processor. The poems are submitted from a journal that I keep with me at all times. Most of the stuff you read is from the beginning of September. I just try to catch all errors. My futuristic idea of the earth is total annihalation of the human race. Bush will take care of that one for us though...




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