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We (Haiku) by Nanshe

the miles mean nothing: counting the days between us. so, for two, it's us.

Nanshe 25-Feb-03/7:21 AM
I will try this again, in sestina. I think it need more flesh, less sinewy twist. Thank you for the honesty of thine eyen.




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