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We (Haiku) by Nanshe

the miles mean nothing: counting the days between us. so, for two, it's us.

dmzoacan 25-Feb-03/4:26 AM
My advice to all decent haiku authors is: abondon the haiku. If you want to keep things very short, images very simple, do so, but frankly I don't see the value in this dogmatic 575 dealie, especially here. Try a 1 1 2 3 5 8 4 2 1. Or I will.




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