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We (Haiku) by Nanshe

the miles mean nothing: counting the days between us. so, for two, it's us.

Mr Pig 25-Feb-03/4:01 AM
The miles mean nothing and everything, try 2/3/4 different attempts at this I do like the idea but its not quite conveyed satifactory enough. But do try --6




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