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i was (Free verse) by skaskowski

i was fighting needles i was pierced by these you were not there to be my saving kiss, i rushed to touch your heart i was pulled by this and there you resided to steal my senses... i can live and breathe within you but i twist and break without you i need you heart to beat in time with mine, to be alive; i only see my life within you, outside i am but a crumbled shell i need your eyes to capture mine as time fades out with love's entrance... you hold me in a trance, you mezmerize me with that dance and i become your happiness as you become my newest sense; i love you as a ghost, i feel your spirit in this void, alive, i live beside you, i would die if left without you. i was fading mist i was lost in air you remained there, in me my saving light; i breathed in your embrace and i was real in this, for in embrace resided the silence of pain- and the birth of new feeling...

shwenatjadeflower 12-Jul-02/12:57 AM
very sensual.




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