-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.22 Feb 2003

This is an absolutely disastrous attempt at poetry. First of all, the title - REALITY - great way to drive home the REALISM of your piece with both alarming and shocking clarity! Oh wait, actually it's crap. "If I were in another place, I'd be there beside you" - would you? What if that other place wasn't BEside them, but INside them? Didn't think of that one, did you!? "If it could work out" - yeah the crucial word in this phrase is "If", because actually, disableds can't "work out". They're too lazy. Not to mention stupid. I think it's time you faced up to THAT little REALITY.

"If it was... but it was not" - ahhhhh but what if it actually WAS? Then your entire poeme would be a complete lie.

But overall, completely ace! 10/10!!!