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Are You? (Free verse) by NewbieMe

Don't you feel like dying? Don't you feel like wanting to go? Don't you feel like hating? Don't you feel like ending it all? Don't you feel like lying? Pretend everything's okay? Don't you feel like dying? And make it all go away? [Pondering and wondering. I know almost everyone has felt this way.]

thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Feb-03/9:42 AM
You write well considering this isn't your native Language. Now onto this poem, It lacks any real emotion. Its just the thoughts that go with suicide. The human thought process is better left in a classroom or a debate forum.




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