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April Showers (Sonnet) by mindsigns

Touch the sky and bring it down Caress it as your child Be barren no more! Her eyes, pure blue, towards nature's mound Hanging above the the smile From her face the tears pour! So young and helpless, still fearing the world She lets the traffic pass and waits alone! Her body trembles, an open door? All attend a mass Each in hand, a stone.... Empty space, Her beauty bruised Innocence fade, emotions used

x311 21-Feb-03/8:02 AM
Eh, so so. Guess I just couldn't relate to it all that well and didn't really see the vision you were going for.




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