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Crucifixion (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Romans laughing, wine saturates holy bread, Judas eats his supper.

Nicholas Jones 21-Feb-03/3:49 AM
This is much better than the other two. The bread and wine must only mix inside the body; internalisation of himself. Now, are these sincere Christian poems (i.e. are you writing from a position of faith) are are you simply using the imagery? In a sense what the poet actually believes shouldn't matter, but I'm curious.




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