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Crucifixion (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Romans laughing, wine saturates holy bread, Judas eats his supper.

god'swife 20-Feb-03/2:49 PM
Hmmm, it was the jews who laughed, the romans were completely uninterested. I prefer blood to wine, though the tie in with supper is a good one. The title invokes a different scene. Right a haiku about the action in the title, keep this one and give it a different title. Judas is one of my favorite characters in this myth. Keep exploring him. Have you seen The Last Temptation of Christ?




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