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Death Of Day ( re-edit) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Dusk came, Sun bled coagulating the clouds. Silver assassin appeared.

nentwined 17-Feb-03/9:10 PM
I like "silver assassin", but the rest ... seems almost there. just not quite.




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