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Death Of Day ( re-edit)
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Haiku
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Mr Pig
Dusk came, Sun bled coagulating the clouds. Silver assassin appeared.
nentwined
17-Feb-03/9:10 PM
I like "silver assassin", but the rest ... seems almost there. just not quite.
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