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Stifled (Free verse) by wordsphincter

Silence from here on in Ive chosen to stifle my words Tears no longer forced to stream I am alone Reaching for his sacrafice Promises of a comfort never lost Abiding by his whispers Muted whispers Only to retain A faint sense of urgency I feel a lack My blood flows cold once again A warmth never to be returned To my rigid cries I can but plea with my own mind Be it of no consequence To my rageful heart Eyes too dark to see What lies beyond this Wrath of the gods Upon my stolen lips A kiss, nocturnal companion Courts your eyes may never grasp

SilverStem1616 17-Feb-03/6:11 PM
I love your choice of words..."muted whispers" I really like this poem




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