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Grampa's Proverb (Haiku) by OneFingerAnswer

When man uses a flame To kill a phoenix he makes His new enemy

razorgrin 13-Feb-03/8:47 PM
if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.




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