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The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted (Haiku) by OneFingerAnswer

Our lost hiker pines For what he lost with no thoughts For what he still has The moon's beauty is Lost to him as he mourns the Final loss of light By dawn it will be Over for him yet he wants What's already gone Come dawn his eyes will Forever have closed yet He still ignores the stars' light He has reason to Wish for the warmth of the sun Yet denies bird songs And thus is the way A lonely man turns away Your offers of love

OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/8:32 PM
Nothing like a vengeful person hell bent on destroying you for offering help. Let it stand no as known fact that I will ignore you because nothing you are saying is making sense nor do you bother trying to understand anything.




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