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Grampa's Proverb (Haiku) by OneFingerAnswer

When man uses a flame To kill a phoenix he makes His new enemy

razorgrin 13-Feb-03/12:50 PM
When (1) + man(1) + uses(2) + a(1) + flame(1)= 6. (a)You can't count, assmachine. (b)Dumb statement worthy only of "proverbs for dummies" books. (c)Poorly written, overall. Therefore, a zero.




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