OneFingerAnswer13 Feb 2003

Yeah. I actually posted this one cause I wasn't happy with it. I wanted to see if someone could help me sort it out. As for the other idea, most of my poems are about stuff that's happened to me. "The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted or An Explanation" is to someone who was there when I needed but wouldn't accept help. "Castle of Sand" sounds like it's about jilted love (which is where most of mine center) but it's actually to my dad who died when I was very young. "Jeff" was my attempt to get a grip on my feeling about a friend's suicide and to see things from his side. "Thornwood (Splinters)" was actually writen as a drunken attempt to get over an ex and then cleaned up some the next morning. So I've written many poems about what has happened to and around me. The only one that's really about where I'm from is "Small Town Snow" and that one is pretty easy to read and get. Actually I think most of my stuff is by time I get to where I'm happy with it. Thanks and if you don't want to helpo with this I understand (I've worked on it a lot just to get this far) but I'd appreciate it if you'd check out some of my others.