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guilty mind (Free verse) by Angel_of_fait

I'm going to take a shower be out in a hour lay your head on the bed sleep with the dead, curl up in a ball like your ma.Let it be said that your dead. barried alive inside your head. Bind the world barrie the sea float up to heaven just ot be with me. Let it be said that i am just in your head. To make you pay for what u said To make you pay for what u did To make you pay for what u are then u shall be dead again and then i shall win. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

razorgrin 11-Jul-02/6:01 AM
I will take your being 14 as an explanation for the quality of your poems. Also, learn spelling and grammar.




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