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Lindsey's Ballad (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

I know why The cage bird sings Its because She still has her wings One day your going to make a mistake And shes gonna go for break Shes headed out your front door And you won't see her no more I know why the damsel in distress Always Wears her best dress Its because Shes waiting for that day When prince charming will come And sweep her away I know why Lindsey still lives on Its because Her dreams still live on See that light in her eyes That light is hope Without it she'd die

razorgrin 11-Feb-03/9:54 AM
There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.




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