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great caesar's ghost (Haiku) by bondjedi

hot bitches in heat! get your get your groove thing on don't tell your mother

x311 5-Feb-03/11:38 AM
Juvenile and just kinda stupid. The repeat of "get your" makes it look like you just couldn't think of two other syllables worth of something to say and on a haiku, that's saying something.




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